Monday, February 6, 2012

Peer Review #1

  • Overuse of the word "advertisement"
  • Not enough analysis on stereotypes shown through ads
  • Weak conclusion
  • Slightly redundant

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  1. Alex GunnFebruary 6, 2012 at 5:03 PM

    Good basis for a paper and I agree that these things could be worked on. Your paragraph where you talk about the lettering and wording used in the ads is an excellent paragraph. Good job!

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