Student Essay #3:
The issue is how to solve deforestation and the author speaks in depth of the importance of this topic throughout his/her paper. They also make the four distinct perspectives very clear in their thesis: local and indigenous people, businesses, medical researchers, and environmentalists. The thesis is very well written, concise, and easy for the reader to understand. Their introduction and conclusion did a great job of leading into and out of the essay. The introduction grabs the reader's attention and introduces the topic at the same time, making it very interesting and informative at the same time. The conclusion answered the "so what?" question and also makes a good lead in to the next essay. I would say the essay was effective because it brought into light four different perspectives on one problem and made those perspectives easy to understand. It is to the point so it keeps the reader's attention and has good information in it so the reader is still learning and gaining knowledge on the topic. It is a well-written essay and it is hard to make improvements on the author's writing.
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